Today we did a little class showing of our video just to get ideas and tweak the video before it's final release. This was just put on a laptop screen and then we went round showing other groups. here is some of the feedback we received.
Joel
The video is overall very good but i think that in some places the video jumps to fast, this is mainly in the studio footage. I think you should have this slightly more smooth.
Ryan
I think the video is pretty good i like the jump cuts for all of the walking scenes, i don't though like your studio footage i think that this cuts far to fast and because the track is laid back this doesn't suit it.
Joe
I like the video very much i think though that the contrast between the two days is to much and needs something like an effect to make it seem more similar.
Our Response
We agree with the feedback we have received, i agree that the footage does seem very jumpy in the studio footage so we will use some fades as well as look at what we have done to correct this. The editing pace we feel is at a good level and while not slow we feel that this is a good speed, there is however a couple of to fast cutting clips so we will look at this.
Lastly about the filter over the video we agree very much on this and we plan to ovally a black and white filter on the footage.